Thursday, August 14, 2008

"OUR STORY"

The day we met,
wasn't it so different ,
wasn't it so unreal ,
wasn't it something out of the latest best selling novel;
how time flew and suddenly how close i became to you,
i just don't know !
we stared off as friends and look where we are now,
it was ;something we planned and yet didn't plan on doing,
something we always wanted but never planned on it being this way,
something we wanted so desperately to say,
and yet never planned on saying !
we both knew how each of us felt a certain particular way,
and yet we danced around that simple fact,
never wanting to admit it because it would take the suspense away!
take away the suspense,
to the story we were playing without knowing,
and so we signed a secret pact ,
about the relationship we shared,
made each other burn ,
all daytill our ears turned red!
and how we used to talk nonchalantly about the way,
we were sharing someone Else's company,
when really we wanted to be alone and stay,
and how we would tease and smile away at our ways,
to be together and even then try to be apart,
just because we enjoyed the game that we played!
and how it seemed so wonderful that we could read each others thoughts,
be there when we wanted the other's company,and never having to say a word,
how we loved the way it felt to hear each other out,
and how happy and bright the world suddenly seemed,
ya ,
ours was not one of those great historical,
perfect love stories,
but was something ,
sassy,fun,out of the blue,
and yet so utterly true,
and i just hope u know ,
that even though i drive u mad ,
and enjoy myself in the process,
my life wouldn't be complete without you!
and i wouldn't be smiling all day through!




This is a poem based on my friend's "love story"

3 comments:

Unknown said...

hey avantika.. really 'no words'.. great work.. keep it on :) :)

Unknown said...

i have read a lot of stories n poems n novels n stuff............but i have never cum across sumthin so gud.............. it is really gud.............the words----they seem to astonish u by their wonder........keep it up girl

$hal said...

yaar..m ur fan now!!!this one steals evrything..so damn touchy! n the most amazing part is the way u have written this after gettin inspired by ur frnds lovestory!!grl u simply rock!!!:)